March 3, 2016

day 3 | slice of life challenge


There is no place like home.
- L. Frank Baum, The Wonderful Wizard of Oz

Many days as my mind thinks about what needs to be done
and where I (and the family) need to be,
my mind searches for what time I will be home.

It is early in the morning
the sun isn't up yet
and I am already thinking about getting home.


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8 comments:

  1. I am already thinking about getting home
    before I even step foot out the door,
    a little more push is all I need to believe
    that this sanctuary will be the same when I return
    weighed down by stories and poems and worries
    left bundled by the shoes on the floor for tomorrow
    morning's journey.

    --Kevin, lifting a line to build a poem as comment

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    1. Your beautiful response made me teary. So moving. Thank you, Kevin.

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  2. This reflects your deep connection to home. So lovely.

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  3. Short writing that is filled with deep thoughts. Words don't always have to be written to send a message.

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  4. Home is so elemental - it's always a place you know you love.

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  5. A beautiful thought captured in an early morning moment. I hope your day went fast and you got home soon.

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  6. It must be that time of year. I started yesterday saying how tired I was. Today I "reprimanded" myself. I got a great night's sleep. But I still counted the "events" until I could return home. The weekend's almost here - hang in there!

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  7. I love how you kind of put a blanket over the day, covering your family's travel, contemplating when all would return, ah-h, back home.

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Thank you for being here.